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9．假如你所在的城市正在創(chuàng)建"國(guó)家級(jí)衛(wèi)生城市"，作為該城市的一員，你會(huì)有許多感觸和想法．下面請(qǐng)你以"How to set up a national healthy city？"為題，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇80-100個(gè)單詞的英語(yǔ)短文．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
  要求：至少寫出包含所給提示，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確的5以上句子．短文內(nèi)容可以自由發(fā)揮．
  提示：throw rubbish  扔垃圾；talk loudly  高聲喧嘩；smoke 抽煙
Spit  吐痰； in public  在公共場(chǎng)合； give seats to the old and children 給老人和小孩讓座； be polite to other 對(duì)他人有禮貌； obey traffic rules 遵守交通規(guī)則；  form good life habits  養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣； turn off the lights 關(guān)燈
How to set up a national healthy city？
Our city is trying to set up a national city．As a member of the city，I think…
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I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
When we are on the bus，we should give our seats to the old and children當(dāng)我們?cè)诠�共汽車上時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該給老人和孩子讓座．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it！我相信我們的城市會(huì)變得越來(lái)越美麗和清潔，只要我們盡全力為它做些什么！I'm sure后面是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，時(shí)態(tài)用的是一般將來(lái)時(shí)，as long as 只要．

解答 How to set up a national healthy city？
Our city is trying to set up a national healthy city．As a member of the city，I think we should obey the rules【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】．We shouldn't throw rubbish here and there．We arc not supposed to talk loudly in public，such as in the library or in the museum．We can't spit or smoke in public either．When we are on the bus，we should give our seats to the old and children【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】，especially some women with babies in their arms．During our daily lives，we should be polite to others．And we should obey the traffic rules．Remember to stop when the traffic light is red．We mustn't go across the road until the traffic light is green．Finally，wc also should turn off the lights before we leave the room．【正文部分，如何創(chuàng)建"國(guó)家級(jí)衛(wèi)生城市"的建議】
I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it！【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】【結(jié)尾部分緊扣主題】．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯
關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．