Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分15分）
眾所周知，控制情緒，保持積極樂(lè)觀的心態(tài)，才能讓生活充滿(mǎn)幸福和快樂(lè)。那么如何讓自己幸�？鞓�(lè)呢？本期英語(yǔ)黑板報(bào)的“Think and Write”欄目的征稿話(huà)題就是“Learn to Control Your Feelings”。請(qǐng)結(jié)合表格中的提示，寫(xiě)下你的感悟與大家一起分享吧。

The importance of controlling feelings	Controlling feelings is important.
	We can find better ways to solve the problem.
	Controlling feelings can help to make friends with more people.
	Bad feelings can cause some trouble.

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。        2. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
3. 短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Learn  to  Control  Your  Feelings
Nobody can be happy all the time.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version：
Learn to Control Feelings
Nobody can be happy all the time. If something bad happens to you, what will you do? Will you get angry?
I think at that time you should control your feelings. Controlling feelings is important to us all. If we control our feelings well, we can find what caused the problem and then we can find better ways to solve the problem. Also controlling feelings can help us to make friends with more people. Bad feelings can make you lose friends and cause you some trouble. So we should learn to control our feelings and make our life happier.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)及情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的表達(dá)方式。聯(lián)系實(shí)際，例舉控制情緒的好處，建議人們學(xué)會(huì)控制自己的感情。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些過(guò)渡詞，and then，also，So為文章增色不少。寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。