Question

某英文報(bào)社就家務(wù)勞動(dòng)（Housework）這一話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。
每個(gè)家庭都有很多家務(wù)，人人都應(yīng)該學(xué)做一些。談?wù)勀憬?jīng)常幫父母做哪些家務(wù)，有什么體會(huì)，并打算在寒假為家里做什么。
根據(jù)以上提示，寫(xiě)一篇意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于80字的短文。文章中請(qǐng)不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名。
參考詞匯：every family ,  lots of housework ,  learn to do ,  help ,  parents , 
be\ feel proud of

Answer 1

Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of housework. I often help my parents do housework, such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and  watering  the flowers I think I’ve learned how to take care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself . And doing housework is also a kind of exercise. The winter holiday is coming .I’m going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them. 

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如lots of許多；such as例如；take care of關(guān)心，照顧等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。