Question

假如你和王翔是同班同學(xué)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，以My Good Friend為題寫(xiě)一篇60個(gè)詞左右的短文，向你的朋友介紹一下王翔。要求表中的所有信息均用上。

Name	Wang Xiang (a student)
From	Guangdong, China
Age	14
Look	tall, round face, wide mouth, big eyes
Family	father (an office worker), mother (a nurse),  brother (12, a student)
Favorite food	chicken
dinner	rice, fish and vegetables

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Answer 1

One possible version：
My Good Friend
I have a good friend. His name is WangXiang. He is a student. He is fourteen years old. He lives in Guangdong in China. He is tall with a round face ,a wide mouth and big eyes. His father is an office worker and his mother is a nurse. His brother is 12 years old and he is a student, too. His favorite food is chicken. He usually has rice, fish and vegetables for dinner.

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的好朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is ……， His father is ......及He usually has 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹他的家人，最后介紹他喜歡的食物。此處用了 with a round face， favorite food，has rice 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。