Question

根據(jù)要求完成小作文（共5分）
你喜歡的一個朋友。（30—40字）

Answer 1

A friend
I have many friends in my life, but the friend I like best is Hellen. She is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and a small mouth. She likes smiling. She likes singing, dancing and reading. Blue is heir favorite color. She likes playing sports, too. Now, we are playing volleyball. She is a good volleyball player, and she can play it very well. I like her very much. We are good friends.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，描述你喜歡的一個朋友�？梢詮乃�的外貌、喜歡等方面去描寫。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱。寫作時注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，同時多使用一些短語和句型，使句意連貫，文章表達(dá)流暢，富有條理。
【亮點說明】這篇短文整體表達(dá)流暢、意思連貫，先點明了朋友是誰，然后從朋友的外貌說起，還提到了朋友的愛好。文中使用了較多的句型和短語，如a girl with two big eyes and a small mouth、like doing sth.、too 等。結(jié)構(gòu)完整，層次分明。