Question

學(xué)校English story telling club正在招募新成員（member）， 假如你叫Lucy，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示給俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)老師Mr. Li寫一封電子郵件。

要點(diǎn)如下：

你擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)，愿意加入這個(gè)俱樂(lè)部；

你對(duì)用英語(yǔ)講故事感興趣，能講很多英語(yǔ)故事；

講述一次值得你記憶的假期經(jīng)歷。（包括：時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)，天氣，活動(dòng)（3件），感受）

注意：

1. 恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)度與結(jié)尾。

2. 書寫整潔，字?jǐn)?shù)：60-80字，電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr.Li,

I know the school English story telling club wants some new members now. I’m happy to tell you ________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Lucy

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr.Li,

I know the school English story telling club wants some new members now. I’m happy to tell you I want to join the club because I am good at English.And I am also interested in telling stories in English.I can tell many stories in English.I usually tell my friends some stories after class.

I am telling my story in English.One day I went camping with my friends in the mountain.It was sunny at first.I took some photos.Later it began to rain.We had to put up our tents.Suddently Li lei saw a snake climbing on the ground.He was too scared to move.I know the snake has no ears but it can feel things moving.Then we jumped up and down.It moved into the forest.We were safe. We were very happy.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Lucy

【解析】

試題分析：本文是學(xué)生熟悉的信的格式，在信中介紹自己的愛(ài)好時(shí)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，要注意句子的主語(yǔ)。但是在講述自己的故事的時(shí)候，一定要注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化，敘述以前的一次旅行一般要用過(guò)去式。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：And I am also interested in telling stories in English. Later it began to rain .We had to put up our tents. Suddently Li lei saw a snake climbing on the ground.He was too scared to move.等。文中用了一些連詞如and，because等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)變的復(fù)雜了。用了一些also，later等，使上下文銜接的很好。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。