Question

15．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Ella最近來信，介紹了她過圣誕節(jié)的情況，并詢問你在即將到來的春節(jié)里的安排．請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封回信．
1．陪伴家人；      2．拜訪親友；      3．看電視節(jié)目；   4．做功課．
注意：
1．應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)60左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Ella，
Thank you for telling me so much about your Christmas activities．Now I'd like to tell you my．
                                                                         
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Besides，I'm going to call on some of my relatives and friends，whom I haven't seen for a long time．另外，我將會拜訪我的一些我很久沒見的親友
whom引導(dǎo)的非限制定語從句，修飾前面的 some of my relatives and friends．
【高分句型二】
I want to watch several football and NBA basketball matches on TV，especially the ones in which I can see my favorite players play我想在電視上觀看一些足球和NBA籃球賽，特別是我能看見我最喜歡的運(yùn)動員的．
which 引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾前面的the ones．

解答 Dear Ella，
          Thank you for telling me so much about your Christmas activities．Now I'd like to tell you my plan for the coming Spring Festival．
          I have decided to go back home to spend the happy hours with my family members．（陪伴家人；）Besides，I'm going to call on some of my relatives and friends，whom I haven't seen for a long time．（拜訪親友）【高分句型一】
           You know I'm a sports fan．I want to watch several football and NBA basketball matches on TV，especially the ones in which I can see my favorite players play．（看電視節(jié)目）【高分句型二】
          Most importantly，I will finish all my homework．And I plan to spend more time improving my English．（做功課）
         Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評 提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．