Question

20．書面表達．請你以MyHobbies為題，寫篇英語短文．
要求：
1．在My后面加上適當的詞補全標題．
2.80個詞左右．
3．字跡工整，語言規(guī)范．
4．鼓勵寫出真情實感．
5．中文不能出現考生的真實姓名、地址、學校等相關信息．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I used to ride a bike and read story books我過去經常騎自行車和讀故事書．used to do sth．固定句型，過去經常做某事．
高分句型二
 I thought pets were very friendly and lovely我認為寵物非常友好和可愛．
這是一個賓語從句，I thought是主句，后面的是賓語從句，注意時態(tài)應該用一般過去時．

解答 My Hobbies
     Different people have different hobbies．I have some hobbies，too．【開篇點明主題】I used to ride a bike and read story books【高分句型一，注意固定句型的使用】．They could give us lots of knowledge．I keep cats and dogs．I thought pets were very friendly and lovely【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】，but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet，because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship．
     I have different hobbies in different seasons．In spring I like flying kites．In summer I go swimming．I often climb hills in the fall．I like making snowmen best in winter．【正文部分詳細介紹愛好】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．