Question

下周你要和你的家人去北京，不能照看你的小狗，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封信給你的好朋友Tom，讓他幫你照顧你的小狗。請(qǐng)他做到以下事情：
1 每天喂狗三次
2 要經(jīng)常給它水喝
3 要經(jīng)常帶它去散步
4 注意保持它的房間干凈整潔
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Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing with my family next week for a holiday. But I can’t look after my dog during the holiday. Could you please help me to take care of it? It is a very lovely dog. You need to feed the dog three times a day. I will prepare the food for you. It needs to drink water several times a day. After supper, would you mind having a walk with it for a while? It likes to walk every day. And its room must be clean and tidy. It’s very kind of you if you can look after it. I think the dog can also bring you happiness.
Li Hua

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。作文是以書(shū)信的形式，所以要注意書(shū)信的格式，包括稱(chēng)呼和署名等。作文里要包含題目中所給的要點(diǎn)，不能有遺漏。各信息之間可運(yùn)用一些承接的詞句，包括使用連詞等，來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這封書(shū)信格式正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，表述準(zhǔn)確流利。文中使用了一些非常實(shí)用的句型和短語(yǔ)，例如：I’m glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing with my family next week for a holiday我很高興告訴你下周我和家人去北京度假；that引導(dǎo)了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。Could you please help me to take care of it?你能幫我照顧它嗎？would you mind having a walk with it for a while?你介意帶它出去散會(huì)步嗎？這兩個(gè)句子都是征詢(xún)別人意見(jiàn)的句子。