Question

4．今年6月5日世界環(huán)境日的主題是倡導"低碳生活"，老師就"節(jié)能減排"問題組織了一場主題討論：日常生活中，我們能為保護環(huán)境、減少污染做些什么？請用英語寫一篇不少于 80詞的短文，談談自己的想法．
參考詞匯：discussion，protect the environment，be caused by，ordinary people，．instead of driving cars，use plastic bags，cut down on，recycle，natural food，save energy，reduce pollutions．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I think ①the environment is ②one of our biggest worries．我認為環(huán)境是我們最大的憂慮之一．
①think后引導賓語從句，省略了引導詞that
②one of+最高級+名詞復數(shù)"最…的之一"
高分句型二：
①It's best for people to take buses or walk ②instead of driving cars．對于人們來說最好是坐公共汽車或步行而不是開車．
①It's best for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事是最好的，it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語
②instead of 代替，而不是，后跟名詞代詞或動名詞

解答 One possible version
Our class had a discussion about protecting the environment．【點題】Here is my opinion．I think the environment is one of our biggest worries．【高分句型一】It was found out that a lot of air pollution is actually caused by ordinary people，not just by big factories．There are so many things each one of us can do every day．It's best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving cars．【高分句型二】We should stop to use plastic bags for shopping．We can cut down on"waste，recycle trash and eat more natural food．In these ways we can save energy and reduce pollutions．【我們能為保護環(huán)境、減少污染做些什么】

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．是要求談談怎樣保持快樂，時態(tài)比較單一，一般現(xiàn)在時，考生在把握了文章的中心后，應在內(nèi)心構思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．