Question

上星期日媽媽很忙，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表，以My Mother’s Busy Day為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。

Time	What to do
5∶30 am	get up, cook(做飯)
6∶45 am	go to work by bus
in the morning	work at the shoe factory(工廠)
12∶00 am	have lunch at the factory
4∶30 pm	buy vegetables and other food
5∶30 pm	cook
after supper	do some washing and cleaning

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My mother's busy day

Today is Monday.My mother was very busy.

She got up at half past five a.m.Then she cooked breakfast.She go to work by bus at fifteen to seven a.m.She is a nurse.She had lunch in the hospital at twelve o'clock a.m.She buy vegetables at half past five p.m.Then shecooked dinner at six o'clock p.m. After dinner,she did some washing and cleaning.I helped her do the washing and cleaning.

Although she was tired, she was very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用表格的給材料作文。要求介紹媽媽繁忙的一天。表格中媽媽一天所做的事情已經(jīng)詳細(xì)的列了出來(lái)，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文基本能夠按要求描述出要點(diǎn)。層次分明，語(yǔ)言流暢。較高級(jí)的句式和連詞的應(yīng)用給文章增色不少，如Although she was tired, she was very happy，Then，After dinner。

考點(diǎn)：表格作文。