Question

10月19日是一個(gè)晴朗的星期天。假設(shè)你們班參觀了海洋公園。根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的日記�？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

要求：1.短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。

What to do

Visit the Ocean Park

 

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Answer 1

Today our class visited the Ocean park in our city. In the morning, we first saw a wonderful dolphin show. The dolphins were really clever and cute.Then, we watched some sharks. After that, we had our lunch there. In the afternoon. We hung out in the park. Some of us took photos. Others bought some souvenirs in the gift shop. Finally, we went home. All of us enjoyed ourselves there.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇日記，記敘了我們班參觀公園的場景。按參觀的時(shí)間順序，根據(jù)所給的五點(diǎn)提示展開 寫作，要點(diǎn)要全，并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意句與句之間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】作文中運(yùn)用了不少短語，使作文出彩，如： a wonderful dolphin show；hung out ；some…others…；enjoyed ourselves 等。文中也有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，如：The dolphins were really clever and cute.We hung out in the park. All of us enjoyed ourselves there.等，避免文章千篇一律。

考點(diǎn)：圖表作文。