Question

10．現(xiàn)在世界都在提倡低碳生活（low-carbon life），它是目前全世界環(huán)保主義者倡導(dǎo)的保護(hù)地球、保護(hù)生存環(huán)境的健康生活方式．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
提示：1．步行、騎自行車或乘公交車上學(xué)；節(jié)約用水、紙；少用塑料袋；重復(fù)使用教科書；離開時(shí)關(guān)燈、關(guān)閉電腦等．2．談?wù)勀愕母惺芎徒ㄗh．
參考詞匯：1．重復(fù)使用reuse；2．塑料袋plastic bags；3．保護(hù)環(huán)境protect the environment；4．節(jié)約能源save energy．
Low-carbon life is good for everyone．The environment is becoming worse and worse．We should do something to protect the environment．We need to have a low carbon life．First，we should go to school on foot or by bus instead of going by car．Second，we should save energy by turning off the lights，computers and air conditionings in time when we don't need them．Third，don't use plastic bags when we are shopping．Instead，take shopping basket with us．In addition，water should be reused as much as possible．We are supposed to use both sides of paper．Don't throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades．Lastly，we should plant more trees to make carbon low．
I think it is very important to protect our environment．It's our duty to have a low carbon life．Our life will become better and better if more people take actions to offer their help．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think①②it is very important to protect our environment我認(rèn)為保護(hù)環(huán)境很重要．
①think后是省略that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
Our life will become ①better and better②if more people take actions to offer their help．如果更多的人采取行動(dòng)提供幫助我們的生活將會(huì)越來越好．
①比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)：越來越…
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句一般將來時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí)．

解答 Low-carbon life is good for everyone．The environment is becoming worse and worse．We should do something to protect the environment．We need to have a low carbon life．First，we should go to school on foot or by bus instead of going by car．（步行、騎自行車或乘公交車上學(xué)）Second，we should save energy by turning off the lights，computers and air conditionings in time when we don't need them．（離開時(shí)關(guān)燈、關(guān)閉電腦等）Third，don't use plastic bags when we are shopping（少用塑料袋）．Instead，take shopping basket with us．In addition，water should be reused as much as possible．We are supposed to use both sides of paper（節(jié)約用水，用紙）Don't throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades．（重復(fù)使用教科書）Lastly，we should plant more trees to make carbon low．（多植樹）
  I think it is very important to protect our environment．【高分句型一】It's our duty to have a low carbon life．Our life will become better and better if more people take actions to offer their help．【高分句型二】（感受）

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