Question

文段表達（10分）根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯，不少于50詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語僅供選用。

每個人的一生都有很多第一次，比如第一次外出旅游，第一次說英語，第一次學畫畫…… English Online雜志開辦了以“My first time to ….”為主題的專欄討論，請你寫一篇短文參加交流，請你根據(jù)下面的問題完成短文。

提示詞語：first, experience, share, succeed, proud, because…

What was your first experience? What happened to you during your experience? How did you feel and why did you have that feeling?

My first time to

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Everyone has many first-time experiences and so do I. Now I’d like to share with you my first time to cook.

One Sunday my parents went out. I felt hungry at noon, so I decided to cook for myself. I tried to cook some vegetables, but the pot caught fire when I put some oil into it. Luckily, my mother came back and helped me put down the fire.

Although I did not succeed in my first cooking, I still felt proud of myself because it’s a start of trying something new–now I’ve been quite a good cook.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以Where is your time going?為題寫一篇作文，即你的時間都去哪了。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。一是過去都把時間花費在哪些地方了，如沉迷于電視劇、做沒玩沒了的作業(yè)，另外還需自己再補充一條；二是現(xiàn)在把時間都花費在哪兒了，如閱讀、鍛煉和旅行。同樣自己再列舉一個例子；最后是想象未來會把時間花費在什么地方，如家庭、工作、慈善事業(yè)等。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者從過去、現(xiàn)在和將來三個方面，分成三段，講述了自己的時間都花費在哪了，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如Sometimes I would play computer games. It was a good way to kill time；I also learn to do something new, for example, cooing. Because I want enjoy the satisfaction of eating my own meals等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如In the past, I was addicted in watching TV series and spent a lot of time on it、When I am free, I go traveling to see the natural beauties of the world、I can do my part to make the world a better place to live in等。

考點：提綱類作文。