Question

13．現(xiàn)在．我國靑少年中出現(xiàn)了越來越多的"小胖墩"，他們的肥胖影響到了他們的生活和學(xué)習(xí)．請你根據(jù)以下提示，以"Advice on keeping away from overweight（超重）"為題寫一篇短 文，從良好的生活方式和健康的飲食習(xí)慣等方面為這些"小胖墩"支招，讓他們遠離肥胖，健康生活．
可供選用的詞匯：
get up early； do not stay up too late； more exercise； stop eating junk food； not too much salt
oil or sugar； eat some fruit and vegetables； have breakfast every morning；…
要求：意思連貰，表達準確，可適當拓展.60-80個單詞．
注意：文章開頭已給山．不計入總詞數(shù)．
Advice on keeping away from overweight
        In China，more and more teenagers are getting fatter and fatter．If you don't want to be very fat，you ___________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You'd better have breakfast every morning你最好每天早上吃早飯．
had better do sth 最好做某事
【高分句型二】
I'm sure the advice can help you keep away from overweight我確定這建議能幫你遠離肥胖．
be sure+that從句，that可以省略，表示確定…

解答 Advice on keeping away from overweight
In China，more and more teenagers are getting fatter and fatter．If you don't want to be very fat，you should go to bed early and get up early．Don't stay up too late．You should do more exercise．（生活方式）Stop eating junk food．It's bad for you．And you shouldn't eat food with too much salt，oil or sugar．Also you should eat more fruit and vegetables．Don't forget breakfast．You'd better have breakfast every morning．【高分句型一】（飲食習(xí)慣）It's very important for you．I'm sure the advice can help you keep away from overweight．【高分句型二】

點評 提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．