Question

時光荏苒，新學期的時光已經(jīng)過去一半了，你的同學和朋友們都了解你嗎？請寫一篇文章介紹自己。包含自己喜愛的運動，自己喜愛這項運動的原因以及每日三餐的飲食習慣。

   要求:

1.不使用真實校名,人名等相關信息.

2.內(nèi)容完整,書寫整齊,詞數(shù)80詞左右.

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

                                                                                  

                                                                                    

                                                                                     

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                      

                                                                                   

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Hello, I am Alice .I’m thirteen years old. I am in Class 4, Grade 7. My friend Alan is in Class 4, Grade 7.  I like ping-pong very much. My friend Alan likes it too. After class, we like playing it together. For breakfast, I have milk and bread with an apple. I have rice, chicken,tomatoes and eggs sometimes salad for lunch. And I have fish and soup for dinner. It’s healthy to eat well.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必須認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，自我介紹應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱用第一人稱。注意認真閱讀材料，分析英語的正確表達和句子之間的銜接。

【亮點說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點，語句通順，標點符號運用正確。還運用了like doing ; 動詞的不定式做主語等等。并注意了句子開頭的變化和的銜接如：and, so等等。

考點：提綱作文。