Question

國有國法，校有校規(guī)。在你的學校中一定有很多規(guī)章制度來規(guī)范中學生的行為，使學生們都能健康成長。請你寫一篇小短文向大家介紹某條校規(guī)、校紀，如能用自己的觀點來評價就更好了。（70詞左右）

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Answer 1

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One possible version:

There are many rules in our school, At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms , we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是材料作文，考生在寫作之前必須認真讀題，把握寫作要求和寫作目的。本文要求寫一篇小短文向大家介紹某條校規(guī)、校紀，用自己的觀點來評價更好。字數(shù)要求70詞左右。校規(guī)、校紀應該用情態(tài)動詞表示應該做的，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作前最好先列出提綱，寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達備用。最后適當?shù)倪B接詞連起來。

【亮點說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點，語句通順，標點符號運用正確。還恰當?shù)剡\用了些短語和復雜的句式，如have to ,should; if條件狀語從句，還有表語從句，可能對初中生來說太難，但是可以作為固定句式記住等等。并注意了句子開頭的變化和的銜接如 and so等等。

考點：提綱作文。