Question

下面是學校留言板上的兩則信息，根據(jù)其內容，請你以William的名義，針對其中一位同學遇到的問題，提出你的建議。要求：1．任選其中一則信息進行回復，并注意補全文首的稱呼；2．建議合理，文意通順；3．詞數(shù)：70左右。

Dear ________,

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William

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答案： Dear Henry, 　　If your mom thinks the clothes you like are not good for you, you’d better not change her mind．But you should have a say in what you wear．Share your ideas with her when you go shopping．Try this,“I like this T-shirt because they’re comfortable,”or“I don’t like gray things”Focus on the clothes, not your mom’s taste．With a little time and effort, you’ll be able to get what you want． William Dear Sally, 　　Don’t get anger too soon．Think twice．Your friend might be careless．Something important to you may not be the same to her．Did she tell other people because she didn’t realized that she was doing something wrong?Tell her how you feel and ask her why she told others about your secrets．If she knew her actions would hurt you, it’s time to put an end to your friendship． William 　　評分標準：根據(jù)短文所屬檔次，按以下五檔給分： 　　A檔：(10～9分)敘述清楚切題，內容充實，表達清楚，行文連貫，語言無誤，書寫規(guī)范，符合詞數(shù)要求。 　　B檔：(8～7分)敘述清楚切題，內容充實，表達較清楚，行文比較連貫，語言錯誤較少，書寫較規(guī)范，少于或超過規(guī)定的詞數(shù)10％以上。 　　C檔：(6～5分)敘述較清楚切題，內容較充實，表達較清楚，行文比較連貫，語言錯誤較多，書寫不規(guī)范。 　　D檔：(4～3分)語言錯誤多，行文不連貫，主題不突出，書寫不規(guī)范。 　　E檔：(2～0分)僅寫出幾個單詞，無完整的句子可讀。